Tuesday, September 27, 2011

A flower that failed to bloom. . . .

" With lots of hope they raised a plant. . . .
They watered it regularly. . . .
Choosed the best place where it can grow freely. . . . 
Provided it with the required need of sunlight and materials. . . .
As each day passed, they were excited about the growth of it. . . .
Happiness started filling their heart. . . . 
Hopes began to design dreams inside them. . 
Among the cluster of the whole garden ,  they anxiously waited for this very own plant of them to bloom a beautiful flower to add colors to their life. . . .


But the flower didnt bloom in the desired time. . . .
Excitement changed to anxiety. . . .
Still they didnt gave up. . . .
They prayed to god, helped the plant more to live. . . .
But the truth was something which they coudnt accept. . . .
The very plant could never bloom flowers. . . . 
And the worst part is that , it is getting rotten as day passes. . . . 


The sweetness of life is getting faded off slowly from it . . . .
The plant seems to get separated from the cluster of garden. . . .
With the disease crept all over it, the plant is realizing his fate. . . .
But hiding his sadness, it seems to spread happiness all over the garden. . . .
And everyone around joins him but failed  to notice the tears hidden behind the eyes. . . .


The very plant which is ought to bloom beautiful flowers is finding hard even to live a normal life. . . . 
They are heartbroken seeing the plant's condition. . . . 
The very plant upon which they had built hopes is slowly becoming their burden. . . . 
The plant could do nothing now. . . .
But wishing to fall on to the ground, the earliest. . . . "



PS: Living with a disease is really painful. But what hurts more is the realization of the fact that, we are causing a lot of sadness to others also who are around us. . . 
- Renju

4 comments:

  1. Renju... loved this man.. lovely metaphor...
    And you need few proof read one or two places I guess.

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    1. Thanks sathish. yeah i do will chk it .Actually this is the only poem i have ever written. :)

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  2. beautiful poem... lovely lines.. keep up the good work dear..

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    1. Thanks deepak. Happy to know that you like it. :)

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